Die Lorelei
Ok, so there is this, like, Dutch folksong called “Die Lorelei”, which means “The Lorelei” in Dutch. But I didn’t know it was in Dutch, so I just saw the title. And I am captivated by this title, lots of ideas floating around in my head. So I read it, and was silly and I was sad, so I wrote a poem called “Die Lorelei”, because I liked the idea, the poem sucked but I liked the story of how I got to writing it, because I usually go through the writing process in screwed up ways, Muse works in mysterious ways. Speaking of Muse, I have a poem I wrote about her, another weird inspiration process, which involves the Odyssey… but anyways, here is the poem. The one about Lorelei.
Die Lorelei
She smiles at me
The sweetness in her laugh
Fills up my heart
As though it were a bath
And her words lavender
And silken skin
Giving desire
To everything within
Lorelei, she says that is her name
To be with her
Is merely, just a game
I follow roads
With clues hidden in eyes
And always there are more
To my surprise
She smiles at me
As though I were a sin
She loves me close
And pulls my heart within
But as the road goes on
My anger grows
My interest, it wilts
Her lips my rose
She’s falling to the earth
Up from the moon
She will be hitting bottom
Oh, quite soon
She was never mine to have
And I just cry
She smiles as I scream
Die Lorelei.
So, yeah, like I said, Kinda sucky. Whatever. Fuck it.
Die Lorelei
She smiles at me
The sweetness in her laugh
Fills up my heart
As though it were a bath
And her words lavender
And silken skin
Giving desire
To everything within
Lorelei, she says that is her name
To be with her
Is merely, just a game
I follow roads
With clues hidden in eyes
And always there are more
To my surprise
She smiles at me
As though I were a sin
She loves me close
And pulls my heart within
But as the road goes on
My anger grows
My interest, it wilts
Her lips my rose
She’s falling to the earth
Up from the moon
She will be hitting bottom
Oh, quite soon
She was never mine to have
And I just cry
She smiles as I scream
Die Lorelei.
So, yeah, like I said, Kinda sucky. Whatever. Fuck it.
4 Comments:
"I follow roads
With clues hidden in eyes
And always there are more
To my surprise
She smiles at me
As though I were a sin"
i love that and i love the last line. "as i scream die lorelei." i really liked it. and i would love to scream "die [his name here]" sometimes. it would just make me feel better, i think.
don't be so modest beautiful girl!your writing is very unique and mature .i would never guess the author was 15!sometimes ppl read my poems or see my art and say,"oh i tried to do that but it was shitty," i always tell them all art is wonderful if it is sincere.don't say something is sucky because you think someone else might think it is and you just wanna beat them to the punch,ya know?i do the same thing sometimes.just realize that your writing is a gift,be proud of it!
She smiles at me
As though I were a sin
THAT IS BEAUTIFUL! I love it. =) keep writing.
ps.
I found ur site from that post secret apophenia
u r getting more popular (hehe). Not exactly a sucky poem, but not not the best i've read of yours. if you were to write a story on it, what would it be like?
By the way, i have to go now, but i am printing off the rest so that i can read it at camp, and i should be sending you a suprise in the mail sometime soon. Stay cool, babe. -_^
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